All Comments on 'Barbara's Cabin Boy'

This is my type of story. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Well written and erotic.

It's not the size of the hammer, as the saying goes -- and there are no ugly women, just some lazy ones; this one is wakening to her true beauty. More, please -- five stars.

A very good situation that can greatly benefit both.

You have an excellent hook to grab the reader. Don't mind the people that rate it low. They are only looking for porn scenes. This is well written.

Pacing and tension of the storyline is excellent. Part two please!!!

I really liked this tale!

You have clearly understood what makes a mature woman wet. And you have delivered it with pause, deliberation, and measure.

Yes, this is hot.

Yes!

Great take. Loved the description of her fabulous body

ok.