All Comments on 'Bard's Tale 04 - Holly Wood'

Thanks TJ,

I like this story, but I must admit that Starlight Gleaming is what I consider your Epic Masterpiece in progress. Looking forward to reading more of SG and loving the fact that your seem just as eager to write it. The muse visiting your dreams bodes well. Best wishes

I love this tale and the Starlight tale.... wonderful works of literature and thank you for the great reads, yes I did catch a few errors and it did not bother me. I knew what you meant. If you ever want a proof reader I will volunteer.

Love all your stories. Been anxious between every one. Keep up the great work and hope all is well in the real world!

For those waiting, Bard's Tale 05 has been submitted since August 26. My submissions the last year or so seem to end up in limbo. I'm sure it's not deliberate but rather for some reason, I fall through the cracks. After four days, I tweaked it last night, changing a few story tags, and resubmitted it again. Hopefully, that will get things moving. The story is done. It's in the queue with Literotica.

I'm rather hopeful that it will cause a little buzz, both for the main story and the two side tales. Funny how that works. Now I have a craving for chicken or turkey. Take care and stay safe. Slainté

Wonderful!

Loved it just as much this time, as the last. Thank you so much for sharing your talents with us. In particular, I appreciate the length of your submissions, allowing me to submerse myself in your world. One or two pages is so unsatisfying, barely more than a tease. I don’t mind waiting between chapters since I know it will be wonderful when it arrives.

As usual with your writing, Excellent!

I really love the story. It is so easy to be immersed into the world of your tale. Again excellent.