All Comments on 'Baring It All'

Good story!

5

I really enjoyed this story. A lot of real life mixed with some superior sex

Wish I could write like that.

Nice characters and dialogue.

Had me right up to the end. I read (Devour) books and this rates a 4 + on a scale of 0 to 5. Good to excellent punctuation ! I was not lost ever as to who was speaking. very good development. I stopped at 4+ as the ending was a bit abrupt. could have gone a few paragraphs long on the let down. The whole story brought a smile to my face. As your writing matures, I hope to see more of you. Please continue writing. I know good writing is very hard work but your readers will be most appreciative and will come back for more! If you want an author to emulate in style only, read some of Heinlein. not for subject matter but for style. He grabs you quickly and off you go on an adventure. easy to read and follow, you have the beginnings of his caliber

It's a very good story. It felt a little rushed, but I still enjoyed it.

I've got one criticism though. 1963 + 47 = 2010. I think you were expecting it to be 2020 and it was really jarring because you hadn't given me any indication that the story was supposed to be taking place ten years ago.

Thanks Anon! My maths is usually better than that- I originally had 43 years and realised that was wrong but I just can't add up! I think I'm trying to keep myself younger with a birthday coming up this week!

Than many of your stories. Waiting for one where there's a little tension..

So, erotically, this story didn't do much for me, but I couldn't stop listening, because the narrative was *so* strong. Easily one of the purely best written stories I've found on this site.

I got warm fuzzy fealings reading your story! It made me reflect back on getting together with my wife, some 2.5 decades ago. I agree with another commenter, who thought the ending a bit rushed. Still, because I didn't think about this until reading their comment, I am keeping my 5* vote. This is the second story of yours that I have read, but it won't be the last. Thank you for giving us some well told tales!

Children and the events while becoming an adult can leading us on though our lives …. So bridget got her horror trip with 16 and following his was a self therapeutic eating disorder and then the self conciseness being fat …… Loosing a soul, some being that touched your soul, is pure horror and its so hard to move on ….. so hopefully nathan can heal this soul or may being helpful

Lovely romance

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Once again you show your flair for placid, undramatic story-telling. The people are pleasant and their personal growth is realistic. One just can't get upset with your stories, but I can't get excited about them either. 4*