by Saphhia
I absolutely love this story and enjoyed myself reading it, can't wait for more xxx
Well, I sure what hoping for a better ending after Steven knew it was Samantha, and after Jimmy and Mistress ran for the exit. It would have been great to find out that Jimmy and Mistress were caught and turned into animals. I was hoping that some of the compassion and dignity would be returned to Samantha. When the doctor turned up at the very end, it just thought it would be just better to let Samantha die while Steven held her for the last time.
There are so many people that would love to fuck a pig girl like Piggy! If you write a next chapter, I hope it includes a lot more sex. Maybe Piggy gets spitroasted? (With dicks, not an actual bbq spitroast) Maybe Piggy gets gangbanged? Maybe Piggy loves it up the ass? Maybe some sadistic girl pegs Piggy with biggest horsecock strapon she can find? There are so many options and so much potential! I hope you have more of this in the works!
In any case, great story, disgusting and depraved transformation just like I love them.