All Comments on 'Baring Souls'

Loved it. Thank you

Perfect story. Elements of reality in it but still a story.

Looking forward for the next...Just keep them coming..

Romantic, realistic, believable characters, likable characters, and a good story.

Loved each and every page!

You hooked me in for all eight pages non-stop. As I figured, another great story by slyc willie. Very well done.- MJL

A good friend of mine is former dancer. You seem to have a good handle on the culture.

<p>You did a great job transforming two characters over the course of your story from unsympathetic to completely sympathetic. I cared about both of them by the end of the story. It kept me gripped through all eight pages. Thank you!

And he can write too... Couldn't stop reading. Thanks for the heartache.

Driven and emotional. Thanks, Slyc.

What a great story! It was sweet, sexy, romantic, and even had some well written angst thrown in. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Really well done! Taking two "iffy" characters and making them into people we really care about, challenge well met. Really good story, thanks.

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Wow! I cancelled plans coz i couldnt stop reading the story. WEll done! Great fusion of love, lust and everything in between.

Your development of the characters was excellent. I really enjoyed this story, from every aspect. You made it \\\'real\\\'. I marvel at your obvious talent. :) Happy Valentine\\\'s Day!

The best thing about erotica of this quality is that it offers a peek into a man's aspirations and desires.<P>

I could just hear the elevator chiming the floors as she..

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Excellent work, and good luck in the contest.

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Maharat

This is your best voice. Your nice guys are far and away your best characters. Your antagonists are despicable, which is, of course, what villains are supposed to be, but your decent guys really shine. More, please.

This is fucking art. Enough said.

Or is it artful fucking? You create the best sex scenes of anyone on this site and that is what erotica is all about

A lot of depth to the characters. Very well developed plot, why have you quit writing?

Thanks Will, I really like your stories. You write very well and you are believable. Your grammer, spelling, and style are all great and your creativity lacks nothing.

I hope you will find time to share more of your work with us. Bless you, Lynn

Well written story. Intriguing that your male character had to deal with his poor decision to spy on his neighbor. I appreciated the fact that Michelle was a strong independent woman.

Five. Thank you.

good work

Absolutely LOVED it. Well done & thank you.

Great story gives me hope in this lust filled literature world.

I was disgusted with myself when I began reading this story due to him invading her privacy, yet I read on. So I was glad that he did the ethical thing (eventually), allowing me to feel better about my second-hand voyeurism. Self pity aside, a most brilliant piece my friend.

5⭐️

Fantastic story. 5 star quality.

I can only give this story half of the rating it deserves because they only allow 5 stars and it won't count my vote twice.

Beautiful.