All Comments on 'Bark at the Moon Ch. 04'

VER GOOD.

I love this story and if you make a side series even better .

You can post a new chapter in this story very often without getting off it by creating some new stuff, then by all means do another one. But as a reader I have seen it happen again and again that the story gets never finished, becomes short changed or even worse, months between the postings which is not of any value for the readers. So think about it very carefully, please.

Somehow I missed a few posting of this story but am not caught up. And am really glad I took the time to catch up because this is a really good story. The fact that the twins are children of two powerful and famous Alpha were's and were unaware is one thing. But to have each involved w/a brother sister pair is great. And while the twins have a deep love for one another Iris wants to see Owen w/o his head. I can't wait to see what you do next!

I put my vote in for a sequel to BATM!

An offshoot or sequel to this would be great, especially if it's about a character that's been introduced in this story (e.g, Santiago or Caitlin), but please don't start writing it at the expense of this story.

As a reader, I'm interested and invested in this story, so if the delays between chapters become longer and longer, I eventually stop reading all together because it's too much hassle to go back and reread previous chapters just to remember what's going on. Too, if you're quality of writing diminishes, such as rushing the plot just to finish it and start on the next series, I would be disappointed and discouraged from continuing reading.

That being said, you've done great so far, and I hope you continue the good work. Should this continue as it has been, your story will be a fantastic success and I (along with everyone else I'm sure) will be eager to continue with any new series you write.

Hey, everyone. I've been, once more, delayed. You're going to be getting another series coming in the next week, and after moving(AGAIN), I've picked up the Archers once again. Expect to see some more from me soon.

Everyone, I'm sorry, but for reasons unknown to me, Lit rejected my latest piece. I've got to figure out what went wrong, but it should be up. Eventually.

It was soooo good!! You have to get the next one up! I understand if your having difficulties posting... It's SOO good! :)

It isn't chapter 5, but it's the best you're getting at the moment. The past few weeks have been rather exciting. Check out "Black Magic Man." I'm sorry that I'm going so slowly, but my biggest work's out of the way, and I should get back to semi-regular postings soon.

helluva story!!! I sure love your characters....especially Kara and Owen. I'm glad to see that they are mates. I figured Jason and Caitlin are mates, too. Keep up the fantastic writing and I hope to be reading the next chapter, very soon!!

really good story! i hope you keep it up!

I love a good detective story. I also enjoy stories dealing with the paranormal. Put them together and I am over the moon! I particularly enjoy the twist about paying back Caitlin O'Dwyer. I am dying to find out about her involvement!

Hey, loving the story. When is chapter 5 coming? Would love to see what happens.

This is such a great story- love the characters and the world building.

Not so patiently waiting for more!!!

ARE YOU EVER GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY???? Or are you going to leave your fans hanging and dispising you big time?

I would love to read the rest of the story!

Love your story line. When are we going to get the next chapter.

Noooo! Don't leave the story unfinished too many clips to complete.

another unfinished story, talk about a waste of time