All Comments on 'Barn Rules'

need to finish story....

Grew up, until I was 12, in Kansas. Went every summer to my Aunt's farm and learned farming with chickens, hogs, cows, horses, and coyotes. Wonderful descriptions I could smell the rain and barn. Unfortunately I didn't ever have a chance to play "Barn Rules". We moved to Arizona which was a whole other league for a new teenager - "seven minutes in heaven was the game - but that's a whole other story.

More please!

You've got to continue this please!

Chapter 2 would be very good.

I liked this very much, thank you.

Part two a must, pretty please.

5*s from me.

I also concur with the rest of the story.

Thanks for giving us this enjoyable read.

Please write another chapter (or three)! This is an excellent story that is very well written. Thank you.

It’s unanimous - needs to continue!

What they said. More. 5*

You to continue this. A couple things for though, for her, she will have money coming in still from military. Med boarded out due iced strike injury. Monthly VA disability check, her medical pension, plus her injury having a loss/disfigure of body part will give her SGLI payout of about $100,000 or so. She would still have her 9/11 GI Bill of 36 months for school which pays tuition plus a monthly stipend. All that is intended to help her build a new life after the Army.

I am an Australian Vietnam Veteran and I think you have a great story here and you need to continue it. Thanks.

And I loved it. PLEASE continue it. (an OLD 86 yr. old.)

As an injured Viet Nam vet...and a guest of the North for a bit...I can appreciate the return home aftermath! Thanks for this!!!! Meant for this to be a 5.

Please continue this, it’s a great start and I have already invested in your characters. I need to know how it goes.

Thanks for a great story

As others have said, more chapters are in order.

Jerry has the first truck I've heard of with a clutch, and a transmission that can be shifted into Park. I know, I'm picking nits.

I know a doctor in Minneapolis who could lengthen Mary Beth's leg. He did mine after the drunk driver knocked me off my motorcycle.

Keep up the good work.

Readsalot

Where's part 2? You better get to writing.If it is as good as 1,you've got 2 winners.

I have just found your stories. Those that I have read are excellent. Keep writing.

Thanks

Liked it. Liked the interaction between the characters and the reaction between them. You have an easy style that flows well, I think. Thanks for your time and imagination.

In The Springtime, Springtime No More,,,,,etc etc TK U MLJ LV NV

I enjoyed it a lot. The writing was great, the dialogue flowed so naturally it felt like I knew them both. A second chapter would be great, but thanks very much for this one.

Loved every word! Great story line, great characters, and great sex!

Shortish, sharp and punchy. Loved the dialogue between them. Definitely worth a further chapter. Loved this one.

Second reading - still 5 stars! What a great story ! Thanks for sharing it with us.

But that is a fine story.

That was well worth the read! Thanks...

You need to add a 2nd chapter to this, very good read

Yep, you've got it. In spades. Thanks for a great one!

What great read, I enjoyed every bit of it

A fun read; and meaningful. I'm ex-combat military so I know her side. I am an ex-athlete with a career ending injury so I know his side. Thank you for putting it all together in an entertaining format.

I hope they fullfill each other and live happily ever after! I always root for the hurt. Thanks, Mike

brilliant read, +1 for another chapter in their lives

great inclusion of female vet...differently abled

Please write more and give that wonderful young man Jerry a hairy chest! He and Mary Beth have so much going for them. and they deserve all the sexual happiness they can get with each other!

Very interesting!

5

A great story, the characters were well developed. Having disabilities, and still finding attraction was a wonderful idea.