by MicheleNylons
This shit gets me hard. Everytime i read a story with long hard meat, sliding, glistening pre cum, hot cum, shooting and spurting, i wanna j/o so hard. Thanks for the nice xrated picture u painted.
Great piece of Erotica. Awesome sex scenes and enough story to not get boring. Great job!
your writing is so vivid and wonderful that I want to be right there and be the fifth girl.. please continue
This is more a comment on the series thus far, I must say for one who happened on it by coincidence I was very engrossed. You do a very good job incaptivating your audience. I look forward to your further developments. I could actually see this being a syndicated TV show. Keep up the good the good work.