All Comments on 'Bartender Sister'

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linnearlinnearabout 3 years ago
Fast and Furious

That was a quick one but very hot.

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
No messing around.

Down to business.

WOW!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What is there is not bad, but so much is missing. And I don't like that the brother is a judgmental control freak.. If the story got expanded it could be good, especially if the brother wasn't an asshole.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

asshole brother, sister has no reason to be into it when he's being such a douche, and only six short sentences of sex anyway

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12/30/2023 - Complete! WHEW! Final post in the 2023 Poetry Challenge. Wander to the 'other' side of Lit in the Forums if you haven't before... 01/2023...i promise *not* to update my bio every week! (smile)..this is my 2nd weekly submission in the poetry thread on the Lit Fo...