All Comments on 'Batteries Not Included Pt. 03'

I'm normally not a fan of dominance play, but I liked this. Well done!

Excellent! Part 4?

Wow!!!! Such a sexy story!!!!!!! Had it all in there!!!!

Nuf said!

Totally insane

Wow. My cunt is so wet. Wish I had a hard daddy cock to fuck me

Excellent story and writing. Write another one where the daughter is not so dominant and the parents plot her seduction leading to a long term perverted yet loving relationship. Use the same level of language and your brilliant descriptive skills.

This Has Been An Excellent Series. Not Sure If You Plan On It But I Will Be Checking Back Every So Often In Case You Add To It.

Not a loving relationship story, but a domination and humiliation story. Not my favorite kind of story but it was kind of hot.

Thanks for sharing it.

This could go on forever and I love it!

Sorry, I know some may find this turn of events hot. I’m not one of them. I had to abandon the story.

Did Mom engineer this? she started dressing frumpy, no sex, knowing she has a hot horny girl and now a frustrated husband. Then so eagerly joins in once its all out in the open. Hot stuff which ever way.

Too many feelings to sort out.

Totally 🥵 hot except for the name calling.

That lowers the tale to a low class status.

There are ways to tell a hot story without lowering your language.

It’s like an eight grader telling a story Toni’s classmates & trying to impress them with his filthy mouth.

Still rates a 5 star review.

Bill S.

Objectively- hot, but the mother/daughter relationship felt super forced. Personally- I'm also not of a fan of mother/daughter. Had to mentally switch the names. I also kept thinking this doesn't bode well for the future- she needs parents that are in control and can teach her. I'm not going to rate this since i'm biased and not a fan of the mother realtionship

Loved it! Very hot. Personally don’t get the pregnancy thing, but to each their own

Nothing but a bunch of whores in this family, lol.