by reluctantwriter
I liked it and gave it 5*s , thanks for the read ! Keep it up .
The perfect story so hot and sexy would love to have been me[
Had a college experience like this except she was chubby/fat and tall. We were at a group beach rental. She too liked it bounced off her cervix. Her bewbs were old school watermelon size. Funnnnnn! We were stupid and went rawdog. No babies made but I came in her twice without pulling out. She was that sexy. I didnt try her back door.
Write more you sexy beast!!!
This is a great sort, it's got raw sexuality,and I love the way you put consent in there.
Really nice, the consensual stuff made it feel very natural and is a great example of how sexy consent can be
This read really natural from both characters. The admiration descriptions were a great look at how others might truely feel about big girls. Well done you.
Clever premise.
But sex is rushed.
He barely starts eating her pussy when they're fucking wildly.
Boom. Then he's got his cock up her ass.
Needed preliminaries. Needed teasing. Needed slow moving forward with dialog about what was being done and how it felt to each.
Three stars.