All Comments on 'BDSM, Inc. Ch. 02'

Too many typos! Where was the BDSM in the second Chapter? All I heard was a crack of the whip. It's hard to imagine that the editors of Lit let this pass, as it was written. Where is the BLOOD that Gary has to have to get hard?

I really don't enjoy too much pain being inflicted even in fictional stories about this particular activity so the lack of any real torture didn't bother me. It was all of the mistakes. Otherwise I thought it was entertaining.

This os one mighty fine stroy . like the it from the start to the end not to long or to short . and the only draw back is not enough tit paly . I will be looking to see the next aprt come out . I just hope it is soon . :)

Wow, that good man..... hope the next one a little more gory. Torture, a little blood, a little scary.