All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Wish For'

by kinkybiitchx

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
route137route137almost 13 years ago

I really enjoyed this story - hot and exciting, with a great ending.

Looking forward to more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
continuity slip?

Why does the main character in the story start her return text with "Its Ariel" when Ariel is someone else??

gotranegotranealmost 10 years ago
A Good, "Back At You"!

It's always great to get revenge on someone, regardless of where that it happens! We've got to have a sequel, to see what happens with Ariel. So please give it to us ASAP, because I can't wait! Thanks!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 10 years ago
Oh, how fun

Liked the tension between the two and how sex became the "cure-all" Be careful indeed

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous