All Comments on 'Be Careful what You Wish For'

... yet another guy pretending to be a woman when he writes crappy erotica.

And seriously? "masterbation"

....than anonymous commentors. Get a profile, write a story(pretending to be someone else) and then comment with your profile.

Love this, more of the same please!7ec1

please write more

No, nothing worse that superficial, ignorant, and simplistic "commenters" who think being anonymous on the net has any bearing. You're like someone who moves next to an airport and then complains about the noise.

All the positive feedback really does encourage me to write more. Thanks also to the silent readers who have added my story to favorites. Xxx HHW

Please keep writing, being a recent runner I'd love to come upon a toned lady and give her some cock! Maybe you've got a story in you of sex outside in that lovely Irish green?

As much as I enjoy your previous stories I had to quit this one at your notice of author and owner rights. It is a rape story! Giving in to the feelings of lust, if she did, does not change the way those feelings were brought about. Sorry! I'll refrain from voting as this is not my style of story.

Animal hunger... very hot! You have such a slutty imagination, HH.

This was such a hot story! We all have the slut in us somewhere deep down in our feminine souls.

LIked it.. Write more.

... but as others have said at least borderline rape. Orgasm during rape is another of those sexual mysteries. She did know the guys and finally acquiesced, enjoying multiple penetration. Well written though, tremendously sexy. I would have liked more on the aftermath, how it affected relationship with hubby. Did she cool towards him, or give him extra as a result?

Loved this story. I am gling to go look and hope there afe more chapters!