All Comments on 'Be Mine, Valentine'

by Pelaam

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alexandra36alexandra36about 13 years ago
Sweet!

As always, I've enjoyed this story as the rest of your stories. Very sweet just in time for Valentine's! Thank you for posting a new story so soon. I just love your work!

maverick40maverick40about 13 years ago
lovely!

Always a great day when I see new stories by Pelaam! This was sweet and touching. Just right for a day dedicated to lovers.

uchenauchenaabout 13 years ago

Oh this was perfect! such a beautiful story for valentines day :-) I love reading your work!

Happy Writing!

willieonewillieoneabout 13 years ago
Beautiful!

It is my wedding anniversary on V Day 37 years if only my day could be as sweet as these two shared but alas it won't be if the past 37 years are anything to go by there is not a romantic bone in hubbies body. LOL Loved reading this wonderful story I am so happy Ryan finally gets the love he deserves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Sweetness =)

Sweet, erotic, a bunch of aww moments. Just a perfect little story. I especially loved the little identity twist =) As always, you've penned a fantastic tale. Can't wait to read what you dream up next.

skankabouttownskankabouttownalmost 11 years ago
Fan for life

I've always been a fan of your work. You are truly talented and have a great knack for describing sensual erotica. You have affected my work as an author and in many respects what type of erotica I enjoy to read and write.

I'm also a fellow author at Silver Publishing, and hope you would enjoy my work too.

Well done and thank you for sharing your talent with us.

chesthairslavechesthairslavealmost 11 years ago

Well written, amusing characters, and very sweet. Great valentine story. Look forward to reading your other postings.

JerseyshoreJerseyshoreover 10 years ago
Mmmmm......

Lovely, tender story. I'm a hopeless romantic and this is just fine

erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 10 years ago
hot but

it's a hot story but i wish it wasn't so rushed. i have read most of your works and though this is equally well written, i love them that are at a comfortably moderate pace. still a sweet love story.

swimguy33swimguy33almost 9 years ago
Very touching

Thank you for a wonderful story. I have only recently discovered your work on this site, but it is clear that you have a great talent and a finely tuned ear for dialogue. You create characters that your readers care for, you then add romance, and finally provide us with blistering hot sex that makes us hard. Thank you, my friend.

robin48robin48about 8 years ago
True love

Short an sweet.

Big strong man fucks tiny tight boy.

Wet my panties

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Where are the eggs? They are cooking hot!

Very cute sweet hot and wonderful love story

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