All Comments on 'Beach Boy'

Wow, just wow! Likeable, strong and engaging characters - good dialogue - still laughing at 'I might as well have said I'm going to be a fireman' - This is a love story that needs to be played out in another chapter. She's only 40, she could still be fertile, all kinds of possibilities emotionally - more, please! I'm sorry I'm limited to only 5 stars!

Certainly a very good start to this story. And very yummy too. It has the makings of a wonderful love story should you decided to add to it. Which I'm hoping that you'll do. Thank you!

This has got legs!! Please let it run. Lovely story.

I love the story, please..more

She has to call him and invite him back!

I hope you will consider writing more about these two. I can see a future for these two star crossed lovers. Perhaps she has contacts with a well known gallery who will agree to show his works?

Great story begging to be continued to Chapter 2!

Max needs to return to Gloria and make love to her for the rest of their lives

One of the finer stories that I have read. Well done and please consider more about Max and Gloria. thank you

Great story. Keep this going. Thanks for a great start to what could be a wonderful series.

Very erotic and steamy hot!!!! Great start, but, it definitely needs another chapter where she calls him and they get together!!!!

Kudos to peteh57 for submitting an exceptional romance story. It has excellent character development, a good build up, an excellent plot, and a beautifully written if somewhat brief love scene. This story most definitely needs to be continued.

I thought your story was well written and very entertaining! I hope you write more with these characters and maybe even the daughter!

I appreciate that you share your talents with us.

Great story. I like the characters. And the storytelling is top notch.

I am particularly taken with the way the author ends this chapter. This is the second story of his that I have read and both times he concludes the story with all the strong possibility open for more. Great technique,

THANKS

Please add more! My heart aches to find them together..

Lovely work

Thank you for sharing

Like Oliver Twist with his empty gruel bowl.....Please sir, some more?

I enjoyed this story. Thanks for taking the time to write it.

Wonderful story. The author balances the steamy sex with the doomed romance trope exceptionally, ending it with, of course, the hint that the two lovers will meet again and challenge the fate that has crashed so many relationships such as theirs before.

Thanks Max for your brilliant praise and appreciation for what I was trying to do. Thank you all for comments and for all of you who’ve asked for more, there are more instalments to come.

Delicious. You might like some of mine. Loved the natural depth.

What a beautiful sexy and emotion story. I can not wait read more of. Max and Gloria! Great work

Amazing story of soul mates bumping into each other on their journey through life. You can't let it end.dontlet it die let the sun Seton the forever of these two

A lovely tale, beautifully written

5 stars x

Of course more,more...A '5" score is inadequate..

Excellent story and writing. I was hoping it would continue but also understand the value in allowing the reader’s imagination to expand the various paths the characters might take.

Epic. Great use of language. Captured the moment