All Comments on 'Beach Condo Indecency'

great job. 5 stars. what a great read. i hope you keep writing!!!

I liked the story very much and hope you continue writing. My main comment on the story was that it should have been posted in the Erotic Couplings category. As this is basically the incest category, I kept waiting for Kim and Rick to admit they skipped fishing and fucked all day in a motel. I still gave it five stars, though.

Keep up the good work

not bad...pacing was done well and the story had just the right mix of reality and fantasy to not be over done

I loved the entire story. Just the right length. My only wish would be that you had left the ending so that the story could be continued. In spite of this, over all a great read!

Not sure it belonged in the incest category though. To me incest is blood related, maybe a married (in law) aunt or uncle that's been around since the youth of a niece or nephew. But an in law of a few years just doesn't equal out to incest to me. But regardless it's still a hot story.

Very well done! We should all have a hot Shannon in our life😎.