All Comments on 'Beach Day'

by LindsayMurray

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oneofthegirlsoneofthegirlsabout 3 years ago

I like how it ended with the anticipation of potential future encounters. I enjoyed your story immensely.

WinsomeWebWinsomeWebover 2 years ago

It's a complete shame this story isn't more highly rated. I think it does a lot of good in only a thousand words. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I agree with WinsomeWeb, this is criminally underrated. Mastubation stories don't seem to get as much *ahem* love on Literotica. This one is beautifully and succinctly told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Me too. Maybe my 5 will raise it some.

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