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by sexiskye
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Anonymousover 12 years agoNot bad for a first story. I found the teasing was believable and erotic - it used to happen quite a lot. However you would be arrested within 30 seconds if you attempted sex by the rocks at Bondi.
sexiskyeover 12 years agoAuthorTy
A big ty for the comments. And you are right would most likely have the cops there lol you would need a quiet beach, but Bondi is famous.
sexiskyeover 12 years agoAuthorTY
Again, I just wanted to say thank you for all the feedback, it's been great!
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PrivateRickmersover 12 years agoThis story held my interest, but I would have appreciated more emotional involvement.
candlesfyreover 12 years agoa good beginning!
your story holds promise and is very short which some love I would have liked more emotional involvement and a longer story with more detail. but it is a great beginning.!
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sexiskye@sexiskyeStarted the Erotic Writing hobby, not too long ago, I enjoy writing and hope to get better as I continue
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