All Comments on 'Beach Lovers'

Ignore the silly pedant, Clohi - the story's much better written than that: people do say "Yessss!" as well as "Yes."

My only quibble was that it showed the man in what I thought was a bad light - a bit too cocky and domineering for my taste. However, as we know all too well, there are men like that.

Keep writing.

f5

Good read, and close to a fantasy of mine.

Felicity is the perfect sub to Marcus’s dom. He know what she likes, he is in charge of bringing her pleasure and she trusts him to make those decisions. Sex is simple that way and it is clear this house sitter is intrigued by it. Very Hot thank you