All Comments on 'Beach Rescue'

by oggbashan

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corrytonmancorrytonmanover 3 years ago
Always...

Extremely well-written; always well-developed characters; always long enough to get the reader interested in the lives of the characters; always too short to satisfy the greedy reader who wants to enjoy hours of your excellent work.

I do thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Seemed a little choppy, but I can’t be more specific.

The story was a great one, but it seemed more like a report than a story. It just didn’t seem to flow fr me.

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyabout 3 years ago

Good story. Enjoyable. Thank-you

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Another great story from a good author, it always a pleasure to read a well written tale that has a happy ending. Well done 5 stars

rbloch66rbloch66about 2 years ago

This story is lacking any kind of depth.

UncertainTUncertainTabout 2 years ago

I enjoyed the story, thank you.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 2 years ago

Love the story , I like it. rbloch66 what do you know about depth? Are you an editor or something in this genre ? AAAAA+++++

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

THANKS ! A Very "Feel Good" Story !

sg1010sg1010over 1 year ago

Again, GREAT READ !

THANKS !

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...

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