by oggbashan
Extremely well-written; always well-developed characters; always long enough to get the reader interested in the lives of the characters; always too short to satisfy the greedy reader who wants to enjoy hours of your excellent work.
I do thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us.
The story was a great one, but it seemed more like a report than a story. It just didn’t seem to flow fr me.
Another great story from a good author, it always a pleasure to read a well written tale that has a happy ending. Well done 5 stars
Love the story , I like it. rbloch66 what do you know about depth? Are you an editor or something in this genre ? AAAAA+++++