All Comments on 'Beamed Up Pt. 03'

I think you're doing a good job keeping the characters separate while still feeding readers bits of sexual pleasure. It's going to make their inevitable coupling more satisfying.

Eagerly awaiting an update!

Right now this is a 3 star story for me. Nothing about this was that different from a standard shower masturbation story. I am interested in reading this story because of how it fits into the larger story.

I hope are going to discover something hot going on with that cube she masturbated with. The guy "recoiling from her touch" could be interesting twist for world building later.

This could be a 5 out of 5 story. But I have not read anything that makes me want to masturbate yet.