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All Comments on 'Beast Within'

by Jade_12

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clarkgarbleclarkgarbleover 5 years ago
Short and fun

5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Don't bother

Waste of time and electrons.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Pacing and build up

Not a bad story but needs more details and the story never really gets a chance to come to life.

BigDog1945BigDog1945over 5 years ago
Rating

Excellent narrative for such a short space

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