All Comments on 'Beat the Boss Ch. 01-04'

A masterpiece of erotic writing.

Thank you for sharing this incredible story.

This is simply fantastic.

I knew from the opening line that I would love this story. The workplace misogyny did challenge me at first (an admittedly subjective reaction), but you moved past it well on time before it became overwhelming, and I was glad to have stuck around. The creativity around the ways of controlling pleasure was incredible. I will think for a long time about that scene with the directed squeezes and the beads.

Nice premise.

But needed her being instructed/directed/ordered to show him what what she'd been thinking of doing to him. Some edging. Involvement with his balls. Maybe a titty fuck.

Four stars.