All Comments on 'Beautiful Love'

what a perfect little love story. great job!

...but there was too much changing of perspective and tense. I kept getting lost: who was talking? When?<p>Could have used an editor to straighten out the narrative. As it is, I just gave up.

Ignore the anonymous responder below who found fault. This may not be everyone's "cup of tea", but it was well told, and very erotic! The perspectives were easy to follow, if you paid attention and the story unfolded well!

They switched suddenly and sometimes I had to stop and reread something to figure out who was the current narator. Otherwise a nice romance if group relationships are your thing.