All Comments on 'Beautiful Stranger'

by Overtherainbow33

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent

Well written. Hopefully just the first part of a series. Keep it up.

ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 2 years ago

That's a powerhouse vignette, and a very similar theme to one of mine, A Girl on the Bus.

Also, go find a short movie by Tinto Brass called Ultimo Metro.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful. I can feel the energy between the women and her stranger as if I am in her shoes. I hope there will be more to this story.

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I love writing stories that have a slow build up and leave something to the imagination. You might sense that in my story "Beautiful Stranger." My style also tends to be more romance with a bit of erotica thrown in. This is reflected in my "Seriously Sexy" series. However, ...