All Comments on 'Because I couldn't stop for Death..'

by iTrauma

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Rbtctrl1957Rbtctrl19574 months ago

I would pray I would go like that, but , alas, tis not to be, my karmas in the dirt. Great story

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

In a word, Unique. I thought it was a very interesting take on something everyone thinks about. Plus it was very well written. Thanks for a great little short story.

PurplefizzPurplefizz5 months ago

Well written, talented editing. Very nicely done indeed. 5⭐️Ppfzz.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Loved your interpretation of death and their back and forth with Thomas

Very well written 5 stars

FandeborisFandeboris5 months ago

A lot has been said about dying.

Yours is the most loving way I have ever read.

Beautiful.

Take care

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Really great story and having been a part of the USNAVY for more than 21 years,I understand the reluctance to truly understand your place in GODS kingdom

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Folks fail to understand that soldiers carry the ghosts of everyone that they have killed.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Movingly realistic.

Keep writing.

Carioca_ManCarioca_Man5 months ago

Although it doesn't actually deal with LW, it was a short text, but well written and conveyed the character's emotion. Good job!! Four stars from me.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy5 months ago

The end comes for everyone!

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