by iTrauma
I would pray I would go like that, but , alas, tis not to be, my karmas in the dirt. Great story
In a word, Unique. I thought it was a very interesting take on something everyone thinks about. Plus it was very well written. Thanks for a great little short story.
Loved your interpretation of death and their back and forth with Thomas
Very well written 5 stars
A lot has been said about dying.
Yours is the most loving way I have ever read.
Beautiful.
Take care
Really great story and having been a part of the USNAVY for more than 21 years,I understand the reluctance to truly understand your place in GODS kingdom
Folks fail to understand that soldiers carry the ghosts of everyone that they have killed.
Although it doesn't actually deal with LW, it was a short text, but well written and conveyed the character's emotion. Good job!! Four stars from me.