All Comments on 'Because I'm Not Pretty'

WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE ABOUT THIS MOTHER AND DAUGHTER TRIANGLE

A great story, totally believable which is always the sign of a good read.

Pete

Love to read more about this very inciting triangle; I had one experiece r/t so YES it is possible; well done; "don't stop"

Now you started and there's no way you can leave us hanging wondering what happens next. You have to write more about this hot intriguing triangle. Excellent job.

That was terrific!!

But I want more. I want them all to be together, perhaps marry, have children, perhaps an adult nursing relationship? Oh the possibilities!!

I look forward to reading any new story by MGM! This was very enjoyable

funny well written great idailogue ...

Thanks for sharing this story! It was a pleasant surprise to find.

Well written and entertaining!

Thanks for writing!

Very nice touch with the character profiles

I really liked your story. Thanks for another 5 Star read.

what a lucky guy to get both mother and daughter as lovers.....times are going to be good for them all......

MGM appears to have found a ' win-win-win ' principle. This is a story so nice, I wish I could 5* it twice.

What a fun story. The only thing that caused me to question was the use of "pantie" when Kathleen was undressing for Dan. Usually the clothing item is refereed to as panties, even if it only one item, as in a pair of panties. It also can be used for multiple pairs. I don't think I've ever noticed anyone using pantie.

Maybe I should change my log in ID to "oldpantiethief"? Naw, doesn't have the same feeling to it

Had me laughing at the end, what a lucky guy. Just goes to show that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Thanks

Great fun story. Especially for him!

Very enjoyable

*****What a lucky bastard. Damn good piece of storytelling. Thanks for sharing.

Nice story. Sensible and reasonably believable. I liked the ending too, naughty mommy ! In another sane world this would be a good story for older teen girls to read. Some positive reinforcement towards acceptance of body diversity.