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by Sirdar

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corriefeecorriefeeabout 14 years ago

Good story, some work required on punctuation and phrasing. Keep writing, this story should be continued.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
drivel needs an editor

This is but pure drivel and needs an editor seriously in the worst way. Lines like "AAAAAAAhhhhhhh.......mmmm.......oooohhhhh......ahhhhhhhh...." are garbage ans should be edited or removed.

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