All Comments on 'Becca XXX - Double Trouble Ch. 17'

Although nothing surprising in the ending to the “Double Trouble” story, it brought a fitting close to an intense, highly erotic, suspenseful tale. We knew Becca well from previous adventures and now we know Natalie - quite a pair. More adventures please. 5 stars for each chapter.

Thank you for publishing the final installment of Double Trouble XXX during the Christmas holidays, fun diversion from what is otherwise a COVID Christmas. 5 Stars to all the installments in this series! You are one of the best if not the best writer STORY TELLER on Lit., and at the same time you also provide enough graphic erotic scenes in each installment to maintain the heat along with the story suspense. I really enjoyed all the little character stories within the bigger story too, e.g. Nat's Naughty Knickers soiled panties business - brilliant and hilarious. Looking forward to your next story and/or series! In the meantime, be safe, stay healthy, and take care, 2021 has to be better than 2020...

The way you started this chapter was leading me down a path of acceptance that Natalie could be gone. The way Becca and Lexa were referring to Nat and the "sympathetically" term used to describe Lexa's response to how Nat would have loved the view in the mountains. I was coming to terms that no one is invincible and that I could understand if someone has to be written out from time to time and then BAM! here she is with her sexy self back on her feet and in the thick of it as always! I must say it was quite a relief to know that she pulled through and would continue on not only as one of Becca's valuable resources but as one of her main loves. I truly loved this closing chapter and just adored the whole series. You truly are a gifted writer and you know that I appreciate you and have for years now. I hope you enjoy some well deserved down time between "missions" and know that we, your fans, will be here when you return with our next assignment! I love the detail and the accuracy you bring to your tales to make them as real as possible in the world we exist in. Take care and as always, thank you for all of your efforts. XXX

Thanks for penning this. A real page turner. Reminds me of another power woman pulp novel series I read decades ago, but yours is better. A lot better. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Baroness_(novels)

I loved this series. The banter between Becca and Nat is pure gold. Love it, love it, love it. Now I want to try tantric sex.

fantastic series of stories!!! Had a nice plot to keep it interesting but yet was HOT as can be!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Great job!!!

Fantastic reading. A film in the making 🤣

i'm a little late for the party. but i just have to thank you and compliment you for creating this amazing saga with its amazing protagonist. the plot, the suspense, the attention to detail, and the characterization are top-notch.

i also must add that Natalie's character in these chapters is simply adorable - so sweet and badass at the same time. i liked the bantering between the two of them. and, of course, the sexy times.