by Naughtybecca
So Becca perfect — the fine details that go into your pieces, the uniquely interesting characters you create around Becca whether “good guys” or “bad guys”, the touches of humor (e.g., shower beat down), moments of feeling between Naomi and Becca, and wildly graphic sex so integral to the storyline. We may think we know what comes next — just enough to tease us with loose ends and new tension as we immerse ourselves in this follow up to Dangerous Cargo. Thanks for continuing to share your fertile imagination. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Ok you got me! I couldn’t stop once I got started! What a great story and of course Becca is in control. I’m looking forward to the upcoming “parties” she will be attending. But mostly, who else will be in attendance. Thank you for another work of art! You are the best!
Amazing second chapter! Think Becca will have some fun in the prison meantime.
So Becca, great story telling, and commercial quality writing, and hot sex scenes, all as always. Your description of the fight action and Becca’s “recon” mind set are so detailed and realistic, suggesting you may have been in the military special forces at some time in you life? Or maybe have close relationships with people who are? The research effort that must go into your stories is incredible, and all us Lit readers are the beneficiaries! Thank you for sharing you talents.
P.S. I am still pissed at Lexa for setting Becca up!!!
That prison governor and the warders deserve everything they get and I don't mean treats. Go Becca get the bastards screwed they should be on the other side of the bars. Meantime Becca accepting injustice like punishment is a life skill, just as long as you get to inflict punishment on the perpetrators. I'm a Becca fan, and i can't wait to read about it over the coming weeks and months. Meanwhile 5 stars will look better on your assets than three stripes. Well done Becca regards Bob.
A thought has occured to me that Becca has been, "set up " to quote shurlin, to expose corruption in prison management and also in the school for girls that he ran before being elevated to his current position as rapist in chief at this establishment, as there is no way this can be tolerated in any society where Becca becomes involved. After her release from prison I'm just wondering whether she may be invited to a garden party by a grateful government for exposing the corruption in high places. Just a suggestion.