All Comments on 'Becky in the Blizzard'

Good job. I wouldn't mind seeing where you go with this. I really liked your detail and pacing. You could see, feel and smell the action. I'll check out your other series as well

Great story, but you really didn't need to add the cocaine into the story.

nothing erotic about illegal substances.

What happens then? maybe the sister get pregnant or all of them, write more this was good..

was good story with nice flow to it but you did not need the drugs that was a turn off

Liked the sex, but the weed was a bit of a turn-off, and the coke was a huge turn-off

who cares about the drugs , some do and some don't. I personally don't do drugs but it did not bother me to have drugs being used in the story, maybe the drug use made them all loose their inhibitions ?

how ever I do think you over used their names

But at the introduction of cocaine I turned off. That shit has killed enough of my friends (3) and family (1). Don't fucking need it here too. What a fucking downer man.

Great story I am 50/50 on the drugs. Not my thing but I also dont mind it. Honestly I think with out could of been better. Or just the weed at least or some X.

i liked the drugs. please keep them in your stories.

its a great story, and its an incest story, drugs are the most legal thing in the story. goood job though.

Drugs and sex. My two favorite things. But maybe just a bit overboard with the cocaine, but nonetheless excellent story with ok vocabulary. you could have made the mom a little hesitant. GOOD JOB! This definitly going to be bookmarked

Druggies are losers. The parent should have stated her disapproval. Kids brains are not fully developed till age 22 to 25 , they cannot understand the consequences of their actions. I'm sure your kids are now in jail, uneducated,jobless, dead thanks to your support of this path in the road of life. Congratulations loser.

Thought it was a very good story. Well written, and with a good twist.

WOW!!! You should make a second part to this.

I thought that this story had great potential until drugs aka cocaine killed my interest in it. So I gave the story 1 star.

As much as I hate the drugs, it was a HOT story <3

I enjoyed this, fully comprehending the effect those drugs can have to the libido as well as inhibitions, good writing, maybe have daddy and daughters in a cabin next time ;) but hey that's just me ;)

I was 19 and he was 18. Same situation snowed in, he asked me if I wanted to do a few lines. I got so aroused , excused myself for a minute and changed into a tshirt and panties. Came back to see my brother watching porn, not just any porn, incest porn. After another couple lines we were making out and when he asked to do a line off my stomach I got wet. 20 years later when we party with coke it still gets me wet and we still fuck.

Written by someone that has never taken drugs, seen an actual naked women other than in porn, or even knows how to write basic English.

Oh yes so well written, makes me remember how good it is to be so stoned and making love. I even loved the incest.

Ignore the previous comment the effects of weed and coke make me so high and horny, even if only family members around.