All Comments on 'Becky's Marine Ch. 02'

by Betrayer_of_Skalathrax

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SlagatorSlagatorover 8 years ago

.... Romeo battery 5/11 I know this cus I'm in pulgatraz. Its nice to see this.

rightbankrightbankalmost 8 years ago
awkard way

to start a relationship

rnebularrnebularover 7 years ago
Great story of romance

People have faults, and a history. Your characters are developing nicely, although I look forward to getting to know Becky (sorry is named after her lol). Wanted to post my thoughts now even though I see the rest posted. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

dgfergiedgfergieover 2 years ago

Good story, looking for more action, not sex, sorry.

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