All Comments on 'Becoming A Slut Wife: Bailey'

Wasn't she playing it for him? Love your stories Bob

Boy did those two assholes deserve what they got!

A powerful, emotional story--thank goodness you let the two victims get some payback!

ohio

And this was one of them.

-Risq

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cheating wife should do. Get revenge and burn her ass.

He did forget to remind her about her "Lorena Bobbit" attitude.

Good, job. DJ

This is your best for a long time.

You got all of the elements for an outstanding story. Thanks!

SleeplessinMD

good fun story with consequences.

Good story, I enjoyed it. My thanks to JPB

Well they almost kept it all in the family. Great story

Thank you

best in ages ...more lol

A well written story.

But as Bob's series of stories has evolved they are no longer "Becoming a slut wife:"

How about renaming the series "Revenge is sweet:"

Can one man have so many pens? bobie you amaze me!

You can find a road to consequence that no one else could conceive or deliver so brilliantly and concisely.

How entertaining of you! In this theme of consequence you have few peers when it strikes you - which I hope is more often for this larger more appreciative audience!

Thanks Author - with Higher Regard

Great story...Keep up the great writing!

You know how to put a good angle on a story. Keep it up!!

Makes up for the "Sarah" drivel on the other site....6 chapters of tripe....even you must have been disappointed ....but you just couldn't throw it away..eh! too much time was invested is that it?

Very good story I enjoy your writting

I loved the story!!

More of the same please.

I do have to say though, Baily was getting revenge on her cheating husband, BUT this guy actually was cheating on his wife BEFORE he knew that she had cheated on him.

I guess it doesn't matter anymore since he and Baily really wanted to hook up anyhow and obviously Baily's husband and Bev already had.

I loved this story though Bob, thanks for your efforts.

Charleybear

Thank you for dedicating some of your talent to those readers who prefer the more traditional LOVING WIVES stories. You can always keep with your more kinky staff as long as you allow us to enjoy the great fun which your stories can give!

He's been fighting Bailey off all this time and his wife is a slut. The video Bailey showed him would be one hell of a shock to me, I dunno how Bob felt. Pretty calm man.

That little twist I wasn't expecting.

Good story.

I loved this story! Great character development considering the length, and great buildup! Bev came across as real as it can get! As a "wanton wife", but as the story unfolded it came clear that her flirting was all in fun.

"Revenge is a dish, best eaten cold". Shakespeare knew of that which he did speak. And you have "paraphrased" this perfectly!

What the f'ing f is this? No gangbangs, JPB? Sacrilege! No 12" black cocks? Heresy! :D

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Great cheating spouses story. Thanks.

Love your stories, I may not always agree with you but they are real good stories. I got to looking and the only ones that get good marks on a constant basis are the incest ones. No matter how good the Loving wives stories are they get busted. This is true no matter who the author is, male or female. So sense i have not seen anything new from you in awhile i reread

Some of your older ones and decided to put my comments on this one for all loving wives stories.

Thank you for entertaining us and please add a new story to the mix. Mike from Texas

bev did, and she and brother in law are entering another phase of their lives.

only to be exposed. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for making my day...Again.

I'm not really into the shaming or revenge, but you always manage to write a good story.

JPB you are the by far the most prolific writer on Literotica I don't know from where you get the variety of plots; if it is from experience you must have a very interesting if not exhausting life style.

What can I say about this story that hasn't already been said of hundreds of others that you have pened? Characters well defined and simpatico, even though the cheaters are made out to severely underestimate Bailey.

Bailey is very well portrayed as she did her best to rebuild her life with Brian by forgiving his first adventure but she was a realist and watched every step her husband made and kept those cams in place.

The biggest surprise was the introduction of Bev I suppose because you basically kept her hidden during the story.

Well written, well plotted and a fair retribution by Bailey who was so well prepared that she even had her revenge in place and it certainly wasn't over the top as most revenge stories are. Thank you for sharing and please keep them coming

a JPB UNFINISHED SYM-P0HNY.

3 stars for the effort though.

Basically swapping partners. What's next?

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Basically swapping partners. What's next?

Well at least he will be getting better blowjobs.

Will it last?

Maybe, maybe not..........but that's true with most relationships and any hook-up.

It was OK for bailey to forgive the piece of shit she was married to and keep her brother in law in the dark?.

Bailey was every much the same kind of scum the 2 cheaters were but the dipshit protagonist could only think with his dick.

American intellect and morality at its finest

This is a prime example of a complete circle revenge story. It was perfect he loses the plain Jane sexually inhibited slut and gains the very attractive faithful, forgiving and sexually uninhibited hottie. Liked it a lot, Please keep riding, panther fan.

A JPB that I actually enjoyed. I knew there had to be one somewhere.

I wouldn't call Bailey the slut wife in this story. She just getting revenge on her turd of a husband who'd been playing "Hide the Salami" with the real slut wife,sister-in-law Bev. ~ Bob is going to be doing a long slow burn not only because his soon to be ex-wife has been cheating on him but also because he saw her doing all the things she'd denied him throughout their marriage. ~ Hopefully,Bob and Bailey will end up together because they seem to have a connection that goes deeper than just revenge. ~ Good story! ~ 5 ~

Not bad but would have liked to have known what happened next.Also why did Bailey not tell him about Bev and Brian when she caught them on camera.?

I really enjoyed this story! 5* ~~JB Edwards

This is too funny. Sort of a who's on first thing.

Haha! Good one.

Like most of this series, you always cut them off just as they're getting good. You're not alone though. Most serial writers do the same thing. You guys need to skip a lot of the " fill ") writing and complete the story. I miss FTDS!

Enjoyed. Thanks for your writing.

Excellent :)

Excellent story

JPB, wish you would restart the pen. Bailey can help recharge those batteries...

ha

Very good complete fantasy. The protagonists win; and get their revenge as well.