All Comments on 'Becoming a Webstar Ch. 02'

And as it always is it all comes down to money vs pride and we all know that money wins out all the time

I'll admit that I'm not very proud of this chapter. Mainly because I focused too much on future plans for these characters and I later realized I had no idea how to get there. Personally I felt lazy writing this and for that I apologize to my readers. First chapter took two days while this took about 3 weeks.

Feel free to tell me your thoughts on this though.

I though you did a good job on this chapter, you had the right mixture of sex and the reason behind it, I like reading the part where Christine was thinking about her future and what would happen if she keeps doing this web show, and she realizes the need to do it the first time {needing money} now she has had a taste of just how much money she could make doing this and how this could solve her money problems, just hope this does not come back to bite her in the butt, but I think you should keep going, to me this is a good series