All Comments on 'Becoming a Webstar'

I can't wait for the next chapter, I guess there is more than one way to earn money if you do not want to work for it

great start, it does lack some detail, and a little more seduction would be great, Christine is way to eager, even tho it makes the story hot. most of the grammar and punctuation is good, just to ward off the haters.. keep writing and I will keep reading. thanks for sharing.

For you to continue

I appreciate the positive comments. I do need to work on the progression, but I did feel like it was too slow sometimes so I rushed it. I eventually do plan to make more chapters and perhaps rewrite this one.