All Comments on 'Becoming a Wife - The Wedding Night'

This is rape and not BDSM. If this is what you think BDSM is than you are mistaken. Please change the category to non consent/reluctance.

Like this is so wrong in so many ways because its not BDSM and just goes against what I believe in.

Me and my husband had a kinky honeymoon but he didn't treat me like a piece of shit.

Please take a new outlook on life.

So fucked up and not what BDSM is.

Gosh, I sure hope this wasn't a true story. What a cruel way for a husband to introduce his newlywed wife into the joys of sex. She didn't even get to have an orgasm! It's unsettling even if it's just a fantasy.

... this isn't BDSM. I didn't much like the story, either, although you have some talent. I hope you will keep writing and put you skills to better use than this. Three stars for trying.

Its unlikely for a man that much of a selfish jerk on a wedding night, not to have shown his true colors long before in a 6 year relationship. This level of cruelty and degradation isn't something that would appear out of the blue.

And a 6 year old relationship that started when a 26 year old chasing a 16 year old is creepy. That's a pedophile and an abuser. Two strikes against him being a 'nice guy'.

Being collared only has a meaning if you understand that's what's happening. And BDSM is about informed consent. This story had neither. This isn't BDSM, its simply a story of abuse, not erotica

You show promise with some skill in writing but your researching a topic before hand needs a lot more work. And should start with learning what makes BDSM more than a game of assault and mental cruelty.

Echoing others. This is not consensual, and therefore not BDSM.

a wedding vow that is a perfect submissive's vow for a collaring ceremony, how cruel to have that for a girl who is innocently marrying into her happy ever after in a whitepicketfence-life, and her hurt and humiliation are the ugly kind.

This creep started dating her when she 16 and he was 26?

Unrealistic? Check.

Semi-consensual at best? Check.

Amateurish writing? Check.

Still kinda hot, though. I'd like to read about what happens next.

Loved it! I hope you write more! (and to echo the above comments, it's perfect where I found it: in the non-consent section)

I couldn't stop laughing while I was reading it. Not sure if that was what you were going for. Seriously... are you in the seventh grade?

Wow you guys comments are harsh. I liked the story ok and found it exactly as it should be very stimulating for a non-consent genre. I see some commentary about how it does not fit the bdsm category; I know that consent is present in bdsm activities and I am not that familiar with anything except enjoying stories in the different genres but I have seen stories and porn too that in the bdsm realm also have non-consent storyline or implications. And I sure don't understand questioning about is it real or not all that...this is a literature adult fantasy site not a therapy office or marriage counselor...I would assume they (stoires) most all are not real at all and some may have a hint of or to some real experience but geez ya'll are like a judge and jury. Again I got wet with the humiliation and submission in the story line so I liked it.

At least he didn't pee on her, share her with the hotel staff, or have a girlfriend that he loved walk in. This was cruel and not sexy, but it could have been worse. I have to thank you for having some restraint and not going further with the degradation.

Honestly I expected him to love her while being slightly rough. this was as if he could care less about her and just wanted to get off.