All Comments on 'Becoming Ashley'

by AshRynn87

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

I absolutely love this story. Please continue.

Raquels_PantiesRaquels_Pantiesover 3 years ago
Jock’s cocks, gotta love ‘em

Ashley Ryann definitely drew the long straw with Teddy. Victoria is a little deceitful, but I hope she has Ashley’s best interest in mind.

Luv your writing. 5*

Reggie2xxReggie2xxover 3 years ago

I normally don’t read this kind of story but it was really good I got turned on was hard at the end of it. Very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Story!

Great story! I cant wait to read more of your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

OMG! That was a fantastic story! Well written and very, very sexy! More please. :)

julian069julian069over 3 years ago

It's a wonderful story, I love to hear more of Ashley? Kisses

IwanttwoIwanttwoover 3 years ago
Just visiting

First story I’ve ever read in this category, and loved it. I generally stick to the gay male page, but you have opened my eyes. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More

This character deserves more! Love to see what happens with her and Teddy!

SissyJulieAnneSissyJulieAnneover 3 years ago
More please

More please.

I would love to see what happens with Ashley and Victoria, will Ashley go further down the rabbit hole and get fully feminised by her lovely wife, will she get implants to replace the falsies, will she get a full sex change or not and will her wife Victoria stay with her. If Ashley has the sex change maybe her and Victoria could go looking for men together or even if Ashley does not have the operation they still could go looking for men together.

I will read more of Ashley and Victoria if you decide to write more and yes even if you decide not to use any of my suggestions............ PLEASE WRITE MORE.

StacieCDStacieCDover 3 years ago
More Please

I would love to hear more about Ashley and Victoria and how their lives develop.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Amazing story! I too would like to see this continued!!

LonicdLonicdabout 3 years ago

I truly enjoyed this story. I, like many many crossdressers dream of this type of thing happening with much the same reactions as Adam/Ashley and Victoria........I long for a Victoria in my life. I would love to live those experiences vicariously through them.........please please continue or create similar stories

TFSallyAnneTFSallyAnneabout 3 years ago

Great read dear! Well done, and right up my alley!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Amazing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was wonderful. I guess being encouraged to dress as a girl by my mom when I was young has stuck with me all these years and now have to admit that I really like it now still. A entire dresser filled with nightgowns, bras. panties, ruffled nightie with matching pantie.

Have to admit the description of his oral adventure is just what I want too, think about it more & more and I like I'm not alone in these feelings. I would go a lot slower and take in my mouth his hardness, swirling my tongue, waiting finally for his release and hoping he's pleased.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 2 years ago

Thanks for a really hot story and you had me squirming in my seat wishing that I had Teddy coming over to quench my fire 😊😋

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayalmost 2 years ago

Wonderful story, very well written, great storyline and Ashley is adorable. This story was really lovely and heartwarming. Looking forward to your next work or a continuation of this story as it has a lot of potential. 💋

Veronica

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

wow I loved that story.

dawndavis66dawndavis66over 1 year ago

Great story. Loved the whole story development and the ending.

Jennifer182Jennifer182over 1 year ago

Ohh my, what a super story, as others said so very well written and beautifully told.

Jennifer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I would love to be with Ashly, or I’d love to be her. I would definitely love to have a supportive friend like Valerie

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wow!! Great story and had me hard the whole time! Wish I could find a Teddy to fuck me up the ass! Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

🥰 I only wish I could be Ashley for ever!!!🥰

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

So the wife turns her husband into the sissy so she can fuck other men if that's what you call love I don't want any of it

1Martiniman1Martiniman10 days ago

This was a fantastic story! Not usually a fan of cuckold stories, but this was written so well into the story that I was fine with it. Hoping part 2 keeps the couple together and happy.

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Hello! I'm Ashley. Now that I've been writing erotic fiction for Literotica for several years, I have decided to update my profile. I mostly enjoy writing crossdresser/transgender erotica but I dabble from time to time with incest and loving wives. Despite what you may read ...

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