by Happyseren
Great first story! Looking forward to more of these 2 characters. Thank you for sharing your talent!
Unpleasant, nasty and totally lacking credibility. This has been done so many times before and usually better than your efforts.
Loved it, very much hoping for more to read from Katie and her stud Daddy
It was good, I loved the interactions, I think I would have preferred a more forced approach..I enjoy the Daddy preying on her concept more and the daughter wanting it but not wanting it. But still a good read.
Thank you for all of your comments and messages about this story. All comments are valued and very much appreciated.
Part 3 on its way to you very soon!
That there's an audience for this shit. It's lazy and ridiculous writing
Impossible to believe over 75 people actually made this a favorite story. The girl acts like she is 12, the father is abusive. And to think it is written by a woman...
Just discovered this series. Hoping the other parts are as good. Looking forward to reading the rest. Could have done with being slightly longer In my opinion.
That was amazing, very well written. It was if I was right there watching this happen. You should be be very proud of yourself. I look forward to reading more of your work.