All Comments on 'Becoming Daddy’s Fuck Toy Pt. 01'

by Happyseren

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Please write part 2. I cummed so hard

Rocketman51Rocketman51about 4 years ago
Short but to the point!

Great first story! Looking forward to more of these 2 characters. Thank you for sharing your talent!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
"You're just a dirty little slut.............."

Unpleasant, nasty and totally lacking credibility. This has been done so many times before and usually better than your efforts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Turned me on

Loved it, very much hoping for more to read from Katie and her stud Daddy

frkhuntr69frkhuntr69about 4 years ago
Nice

Very nice. Want to read a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

It was good, I loved the interactions, I think I would have preferred a more forced approach..I enjoy the Daddy preying on her concept more and the daughter wanting it but not wanting it. But still a good read.

HappyserenHappyserenabout 4 years agoAuthor

Thank you for all of your comments and messages about this story. All comments are valued and very much appreciated.

Part 3 on its way to you very soon!

PhineasNPhineasNabout 4 years ago
It's sad

That there's an audience for this shit. It's lazy and ridiculous writing

OneSevenOneOneSevenOneabout 4 years ago
Wow!

Impossible to believe over 75 people actually made this a favorite story. The girl acts like she is 12, the father is abusive. And to think it is written by a woman...

Kelli223sexyKelli223sexyabout 4 years ago
Mmmmmmm, horny!

Just discovered this series. Hoping the other parts are as good. Looking forward to reading the rest. Could have done with being slightly longer In my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Shocked

That was amazing, very well written. It was if I was right there watching this happen. You should be be very proud of yourself. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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