by pegyn
....would like it better if you concentrated on the daddy/daughter fantasy more than just the mechanics of their sex. Surprised this not in loving wives?
an interesting read :-) . . . it really should not be classified as "incest" since Daddy/daughter is actually part of the D/s world . . this should have been classified as BDSM . . . the story was a bit short so you could only really focus on the sex, and not the underlying dynamic of that type of relationship . . . . it will be interesting to see if you take this concept and develop it more fully in a longer story
I'm thinking this is a great start to an incest story between father and daughter. She never really looked back to confirm that it was her husband. While she likes the daddy role and thinks the father role is disgusting, it might change do to the fact that he (her father) got her off. If this isn't what you were going for, then it should be in a different class. Continue the story.....
If you've not decided to add to this story you should.. Very well start to one.. Although I wished that you had said if it was her hubby or if it turned out to be her daddy.. ^_^.. Great start though.. Loved it..