All Comments on 'Becoming Daddy's Good Girl Ch. 04'

Poor naive little girl to think her mom doesn’t know exactly what transpired, or will continue to do so.

Story is developing very well. Looking forward to next chapters. Is Mom (and sister) going to be involved when she returns? Like Sun's involvement, asian girls are so pretty, especially when their dark hair is spread out on a white pillowcase.

Did you rush to get this chapter published? Seems like the quality of the writing is going down. Wrong words, dropped words, other errors that would be picked up by a proofreader. If you are the proofreader, suggest that when you complete a chapter, put it aside for 24 hours, then proofread.

On to the next chapter.

Another great chapter in this series. The mall fucking was a little implausible but still hot. I love these characters and am hooked. I wonder if mom knows full well what’s going on in her absence?

So sucking fucking hot, what would I not give to suck and fuck my brains out with those two teen cunts. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.

I’d do anything to be my Daddy’s cum slut. Lucky girl.

"Let me be your salve" This is a very competitive space, don't deliberately drive readers to your competition.

Some would say; "If you don't bother, I won't either". I say 'fix, then track results'.

Also, why is there a 'mind control' tag on this chapter? #1, #2 and #3 are not so tagged.