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All Comments on 'Becoming Daddy's Good Girl Ch. 07'

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UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 2 years ago

Good continuation to the story but I noticed more boo-boos than the other chapters. The pendant on her choker was a unicorn in the earlier chapter and now it is a dolphin. There were other instances of typos and misused words which distracted from the narrative. You’re a great story teller so you should pay closer attention to these details.

Also, I would have liked to see more resistance from the sister. , but that’s just my personal preference.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I'm not a big fan of the whole BDSM scene, especially at this level of intensity, but I have admit, this is pretty damn hot. Especially with the two sisters showing each other some love. I'm excited to see how it turns out. Daddy is the luckiest SOB for sure.

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