by mypenname3000
This was a very fun, sexy romp. The only problem was the annoying recap at the beginning of each chapter.
Would you pick up a book and start reading at chapter 4? Of course not, only an idiot would. Then why do you cater to possible idiots who would pick up a multi chapter story in the middle? There is no need for the recap. If the idiots didn’t read chapter 1 first, fuck them. Your devoted readers would much rather just hear the story.
I have selected you as a favorite author, and hope to read other multi chapter stories where are you save us the time with no recap.
I loved this story series. Told from the perspective of their family slut daughter. Thanks ❤️🔥
No doubt in my mind, that future family reunions will be...interesting. Especially if Alice and Brian give birth to twin girls, who, in about 18 years, become pain sluts, like their mother, aunt, and grandma.
Love all your works. About read them all. Keep up the good!!! From Fort Worth, Texas
I played a game with the story. If I thought the chapter was good I’d masterbate. It was a great story. 😁
It was a good story but a few mix up, A couple times the choker a unicorn and then a dolphin. And 1 time she said he pulled his cock out of her cock. But it was a good story over all.
Well that was an interesting ending. I was certain Melody would be Daddy's Good Girl for life and would give him children if possible, so that was no surprise. I thought Alice was going to end up joining them, but 5 years isn't bad, and she proved to be just as good as Melody it seems. Was actually a little sad when she was no longer Daddy's Good Girl, finding another master and falling in love. Not surprised though since she didn't really love her dad in that particular way, unlike Melody, who was in love with him from pretty much the start. Still, it would have been sweet if they all stayed together and both daughters got pregnant with their father's baby at the same time.