All Comments on 'Becoming Flyer Ch. 02'

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jenorma2012 over 5 years ago

sorry

Not as good as the first part, but still except for the whip it was good

BlinkOneSomething over 5 years agoAuthor

Thank you

Appreciate the feedback jen. Chap 6 is written but I am submitting them one at a time to not piss off the mods 😃

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