All Comments on 'Becoming Hers Pt. 01'

I will give you a 4

I wish

Have you ever really ate pussy?

Please part 2 soon

Read this genre plenty.. this is hands down one of the best.. you did everything perfectly.. the implicit greed and necessity of her to cum, so she makes him pull over to use his mouth to swallow her squirt? Effing A+

My best friend invited me over to meet his 'New Girlfriend'. I walked in and there she was: naked, between his legs,on her knees, sucking his cock with her beautiful Big ass in the air. I slipped my face into her inviting neither regions and went to work sucking, licking, devouring her secretions as I could hear her moaning around my friends cock filling her mouth. I then left, I didn't introduce myself, she didn't even see me. I arranged a 'First Date' Tied her hands with her Panties climbed on for an incredible '69'. It was all a first for both of us, we eventually got married.: she liked me better than him...he never 'Went Down On Her'.

It would be exciting to be that totally claimed - even tho he did have to light her fuse in the beginning she sure read his desires to be submissive.

Good premise.

But rushed. Lacking in details.

Four stars.