All Comments on 'Becoming His Ch. 01'

very well done...hot....part 2 soon

awesomely hott!

Clearly the twins are loving well too. Why else mention them and their location. I would like to see her become property of both parents.

This is one of the stories we can do with/out. What a bunch of garbage*

I love this. Keep writing! I want more!!!

First off, the 3rd comment below mine saying this story is garbage, fuck off you no good troll, little kids shouldn't be on this site in the first place, and I am angered when someone say's something that isn't required at all.

Now then, I loved MOST of the aspects of the story as I did see some flaws and kinks.

Other than that, I enjoyed the first chapter very nicely and hope to see more in the nearby future.

^_^

Chapters 2& 3 coming?

At some point Daddy must get her pregnant - maybe more than once!

@Sam Warren's

Sorry, been away awhile. Going to start working on more soon again.