All Comments on 'Becoming Joy Ch. 01'

I adore this story. Not just for the sexual appeal of which there is plenty, but the added hint of a secret, a unique fantasy being put into words has me on edge waiting for the next installment.

Provocative, luridly detailed in just the right way I found this to be your best story to date. Please get the next chapter available soon, I can hardly wait to find out the secret she keeps!

I like the detail it's just enough to get the picture but now too much to be unsatisfying