All Comments on 'Becoming Kitten Pt. 01'

...to a superb cliffhanger. Please don't leave us hanging too long!

Believable characters i can care about. Enticing plot. Don't stop...

Best Regards,

-a

Love it so far. Really looking forward to seeing how they progress and how Nick overcomes his reluctance.

Writing in present tense is just dumb.

There better be more to come!

You have been very naughty ending like that and leaving me stoking 8 hard inches. Don't keep doing this or I'll have a heart attack.

What is the deal?

like tease stories

Not much more to say. It sucks.

Hopefully you will be adding more chapters REALLY soon (hint hint). I definitely enjoyed this opening chapter and I would love to read more about these two and their newly developing relationship.I gave this 5⭐ please keep it coming.--nikki💋

...that it was going to be a long developing story, and they didn't listen. You just keep writing the story the way you want. There will be people, like me, who appreciate it. That said, she really is being rather cruel to her dad, which I suppose is part of the psychological elements of the story, but is still rather upsetting.

honestly one of the best stories ive read on literotica. This is top top quality stuff. Actual build up, complex characters, and convincing story line (in comparison to all these "daddy" stories where fathers and daughters just MAGICALLY abandon who they are after one paragraph of introduction). Keep up the good work and please do publish soon again!

This is a great and realistic story! Take your time and create another masterpiece!!!

This reads like if Bobby Ann Mason had decided to write erotica instead of about the people of Western Kentucky. A good first chapter for what seems to be a strong story.