All Comments on 'Becoming Monsters 1: Ch. 01'

So much headache to get this published, but it couldn’t look better and I’d like to shoutout to the mods of Lit for being so patient with me to get this started. Got a lot more chapters just like this cumming up!

So far, a fun story. It's got interesting world-building with a sympathetic main character who I look forward to watching as she grows and develops throughout the story, and what Kind of trouble she gets in. Though will she be able to keep her third leg in her pants for long.

I love this story. Still, I'm looking forward to where book 2 begins. But this is a nice steady diet of futalove leading up to the main course.

Definitely enjoy this story. Cant wait for more chapters.

good story different but good. on to the next chptr.

nice start

Different -- which is usually a good thing....