All Comments on 'Becoming Monsters 1: Ch. 17'

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NoctustheOwlNoctustheOwlalmost 2 years ago

Yay for Banda. And honoka put down the evil aunt nicely.

AiLovesAiLovesalmost 2 years agoAuthor

As someone who has had family drama, I wanted a kind of catharsis to whatever problems I had, even if it was only make believe. Its my smut fantasy, I'll have family members love each other if I want to!

LiterKnightLiterKnightalmost 2 years ago

Excellent chapter. Always nice to shut down strict family members in a good way. Should we expect an explosion of milk next chapter? Looking forward to it, regardless

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hm, but doesn't such brokering of peace leave the bovine matriarch portrayed as purely selfish? You mad and nitpicking? Here, you give up your racist breeder plan, but now you have a good chance of clearing your family shame. No longer mad now? ... Okay. But not much of a redemption.

Cautiously liking the story so far, I feel like bracing for mixed feelings, the chapter numbers run on and story progresses rather slowly.

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthoralmost 2 years ago

Shit, new fetish added... come on! i don't need any more!

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlot6 months ago

Interesting interplay between Honoka and the holstaurs (that sounds like a 50s rock girl group...). I'm still wondering what the status box looks like now. While this is not a cliff hanger per se, I am still eager to se what the next chapter holds.

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